Band-9-essays- Template for IELTS PDF
| Title | Band-9-essays- Template for IELTS |
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| Author | Saad Ahmed |
| Course | Engineering Economics |
| Institution | University of Engineering and Technology Taxila |
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Others,however,believethatmixedschoolsprovidechildrenwithbettersocialskillsforadu life.Discussboththeseviewsandgiveyourownopinion. Inthepresentage,whether single-sexschoolsprovidemorebenefitsthanmixedschool has sparked much debate. Some people assert that students in single-sex schools have better academic achievements, whereas many others argue that mixed schools offe studentsbettersocialskillsfortheirfuture.Personally,Iaminfavourofthelatterview. Convincingargumentscanbemadethatmixedschoolsprovideamorecomprehensive learningenvironmentforchildren.Tostartwith,studentsstudyingatmixedschoolshavemore chances to communicate with members of the opposite sex. In other words, children lear howtotalktotheothergenderatanearlyage;therefore, theirsocialskillswouldcertainlyb fostered. Moreover, mixed schools give students opportunities to deal with conflicts with th other gender, which strengthens students’ problem-solving skills. For instance, when a bo hasaconflictwithagirlatschool,bothof themmustlearnhowtocope.Thislessonmustb learnedsoonerorlater;asaresult,studentsbenefitmoreiftheycanlearnitsooner.Lastly mixed schools provide students with a real-life scenario where both genders co-exist Specifically,studentsareabletolearninanorganicenvironmentinwhichboysandgirlsmus knowhowtointeractwitheachother. Admittedly,single-sexschoolshavefewerdistractions.Thereasonforthisisifaschoo only has boys or girls, students would not be distracted by members of the opposite sex a school; hence, they can focus on their learning. Even so, these students still have access t theothergenderafterschool,whichmeansinreality,theymustmeettheothergenderanyway Consequently,thebenefitsofsingle-sexschoolsarequitelimited. In summary,I wouldconcede that single-sex schools have some advantages. Despit that,mixedschoolscertainlysupportstudentsinamuchbetterway.Overall,Iamconvinced thatstudentsshouldgotomixedschools.
theiracademicqualifications.Doyouagreeordisagreewiththisopinion? There has been much discussion revolving around the issue of whether job applicants’ social skillsaremore importantthan theiracademic qualifications. In this essay, willexplainwhysocialskillsaremorevital,comparedwithacademicqualifications. Themeritsofoutstandingsocialskillsareapparent. Firstly, communicationisthekeyt careersuccessinthisdayandage. Thisismainlyduetothefact that the21st century is bestcharacterisedbyconstantinteractionwithdifferentpeople,nomatterthecommunicatio happensinpersonoronline.Secondly,theabilitytosellproductsorservicesisofparamoun significance in any business – this requires strong social skills. For example, an employe withexcellentsocialskillsisabletohaveanimpactinfrontofcustomersorclients;asaresult products or services can be perceived as high-value. Furthermore, employees with bette socialskillsaregenerallymoreeasy-going,whichisveryimportanttotheworkplace,includin theemployer.Afterall, asthe saying goes, “Who you work with isasimportantaswhat yo do.”–Anenjoyableworkenvironmentneedssociallyskilfulemployees. Incontrast,someothersmayclaimthatacademicqualificationsarethe pre-requisite of employment. Apparently, many positions require certain qualifications. However, in modern-day society, more and more employers have realised that whether employees ca gettheresultsthatthebusinesswantsisthekeytoabusiness’success.Itcanbeseentha qualificationsdonotplayakeyroleinthisregard. Having considered both views, I think employees’ social skills are of overriding importance for an organisation. Also, I would suggest employers consider job applicants social skills first, which I believe is soundly based on the above reasoning I have presented.
allstudents,regardlessoftheirfinancialsituation.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree? These days, public debate has been going on over whether the government should maketertiaryeducationfreeforallstudents.Itendtobelievethathighereducationshouldbe free–forthefollowingreasons. Threemain factors support the ideaoffree university education. The primary facto weneedtotakeintoconsiderationisthatmanystudentscannotafforduniversityeducation althoughtheytrulywanttogetdegrees.Obviously,withoutenoughfinancialresources,thes students have to give up their dreams, which is unfair to them. Besides, the government i alreadywastingtaxpayers’moneyonprojectssuchasspaceexplorationbymakingspaceship –thefundshouldbespentonuniversityeducation.Thatistosay,thegovernmentwould be well-advised to allocate resources in a more sensible way. A third reason for my belief is that high tuition fees may prevent some students from studying at university. It is widely recognised that many young people are reluctant to face their loans after graduation, whic meanssuchaburdenmightmakeuniversityeducationlessattractive. I admit that students’ financial contributions to higher education helps universities t improvefacilities.Despitethat,amorereasonablegovernmentfundsallocationcansolvethi issue,forwhichwecanfindplentyofevidencefromourownexperience. Inconclusion, Iwouldargue that tertiary education shouldbe paid by thegovernment Accordingly, it would be generally advisable for the government to allocate financia resourcesinamorebeneficialway.
easieriftherearefewerlanguagesintheworld.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree? In this age of change, English as a global lingua franca facilitates cross-cultura communication. As a result, several languages die out each year, which is not important i somepeople’sopinionbecauselifewillbeeasier withfewerlanguages. However, I disagre withthisidea. Thedisappearanceoflesser-knownlanguagesleadsto a range of issues. First of all the expansion of English erodes the cultural identity of other races. More specifically, th prevalence of English can aggravate the sense of cultural inferiority among speakers of othe languages. In the second place, the disappearance of other languages causes the loss o othercultures.Forinstance,Latinisalreadyadeadlanguagenowbecausenearlynobodyca speakthislanguageintheworldatthemoment;therefore,theculturewhichbacksupLatini also lost. Finally, loss of cultures could result in loss of heritage such as traditional values Forexample,some cultures highlyvaluefamily and education; consequently,if thoseculture are lost, many important and beneficial values will also be rendered obsolete, which is no helpful. Granted, life can be easier if people speak fewer languages in contemporary society Nevertheless, translators and interpreters will lose their jobs if more and more language disappear – this is not good for global economy. Therefore, it is clear that more languages generatemoreemploymentopportunities. In conclusion, although English as a universal language enables cross-cultura communication,theimportanceofotherlanguagesshouldnotbeignored.Asaconsequence, would assert that languages other than English must be respected, protected and preserved.
however,thinkthat theyshouldbereplacedbynewbuildings. Discussboththeseviewsan giveyourownopinion. In present-day society, many cities face the issue of whether old buildings should be replacedbynewbuildingsornot.AsIseeit,oldbuildingsshouldbemaintained. Historic buildings certainly have much value in various ways. In the first place, a large numberofhistoricbuildingsrepresentspecifichistoricalfiguresorevents.Tobemoreexact, such buildings were razed, there would be no precise representation of the corresponding figures and events anymore. Further, some historic dwellings embody the unique lifestyle o ethnic groups. Without a doubt, it could be an ethnological disaster if these buildings were demolishedbecauseofcurrenturbanneeds.Lastbutnotleast,many historicbuildingshave outstanding aesthetic value. That means any replication can never show the ancien craftsmanshipaccurately. Surely, due to the rapid increase of urban population, some historic buildings should b knocked down in order to make room for high-rise apartment buildings. Yet a more sensible solution to this problem can be developing urban transport so that people can easily live i nearbysuburbsandcommuteeasilyeveryday. To conclude, though old buildings may have occupied a lot of urban space, their value shouldnotbeneglected.Inlightoftheabovefactors, Ifirmlybelievethat historicbuildings mustbelookedafterbymoderncities.
that the problems caused by international tourism outweigh the benefits. To what extent do youagreeordisagree? At the present time, international tourism is a big industry. Meanwhile, whether thi trend has more benefits or more problems is a frequent topic of discussion. From my perspective,internationaltourismisdefinitelybeneficialinmanyways. International tourism creates great benefits on different levels. First and foremost, provides individuals opportunities to see a different culture first-hand. According to my observation, visiting another country is a comprehensive experience, which is much mor enjoyable than staring at another culture on a computer screen. Additionally, internationa tourism boosts the economy of the host country. Take Australia as an example. During th previous decade, international tourism has produced numerous employment opportunities i various sectors of Australia. In the third place, knowledge gained during overseas trip certainly helps eliminate a range of stereotypes tourists have about the host country. In this way,individualscanexpandtheiroutlookandbecomeworldlier. Ofcourse,non-biodegradablelitterleftbehindbytouristsposesabigthreattothehos country.Nonetheless,touristdestinationscancertainlyestablishrelevantlawsandregulation so that this issue can be addressed. Once the economy of the host country has bee enhanced by international tourism, it would be easier for the local government to implemen effectivestrategiestosolvethisproblem. Tosumup, inspiteofthefactthat internationaltourismmayimpedetheenvironmento tourist destinations, the advantages of international tourism surely outbalances it disadvantages.
othersbelievethatindividualsshouldberesponsiblefortheirownhealth.Discussboththes viewsandgiveyourownopinion. Incurrentsociety,whetherpublichealthisthegovernment’sresponsibility orindividuals responsibility has aroused a debate. From my point of view, public health should be individuals’responsibility. Individualsaresupposedtoberesponsiblefortheirownhealthforavarietyofreasons To begin with, individuals know their own health better than others. It is evident that the government cannot understand everyone’s needs realistically, thus individuals must shoulde theresponsibilityforlookingafter themselves. Then,anindividual’sself-disciplineistheke tobetterhealth.Moreexactly,nobodycanreplaceanindividualtomanagetheirownlifestyl wellinordertoimprovetheirhealth.Moreover,individuals,especiallyadults,mustrealisetha beingresponsiblefortheirownhealthisalsobeingresponsibleforthesociety.Inotherwords ifeveryone issabotaging theirown health,therewillbe moreburdenfor the society,which i notaplacethatpeoplewanttobe. Certainly,thegovernmentneedstoprovidesufficientsupportintermsofimprovingpubli health. However, the government cannot do much apart from offering financial support an educationinthisarea.Asaresult,theultimateresponsibilitystillliesinindividuals’actions. In sum, the government should contribute to public health, but individuals must be responsiblefortheirownhealth.Inthisway,peoplewillbeabletoliveinamorewholesom society.
together.Doyouthinktheadvantagesofmulti-culturalsocietiesoutweighthedisadvantages? Nowadays,multi-culturalsocietiesarebestcharacterisedbypeopleofdifferentcultura backgrounds.Inmyopinion,thefactthatpeopleofdiverseculturalbackgroundsliveandwor togetherbringsmoreadvantagesthandisadvantages. Livingandworkinginamulti-culturalsocietycreatesawidevarietyofbenefits. Tostar with,peoplecanbroadentheirhorizonsbylivingandworkinginamulti-culturalenvironment Specifically,differentculturesgeneratesdifferentviewpointsandideas,whichhelpspeoplet betterunderstandtheworld.Besides,peoplefromdifferentculturalbackgroundscontributeto the society in more creative ways. Evidently, countries such as Australia and Canada hav more festivals to celebrate because of their multi-cultural nature, which means rich culture arefosteredinthesecountries.Aboveall,peoplefromdifferentcultureshelpthemulti-cultura society boost its economy. To be more specific, immigrants as well as their families an friends create alargeamountof profit forthetourismindustry,which directlygeneratesmore revenueforthemulti-culturalsociety. On the other hand, some arguments can be made that multi-cultural societies may havemoreconflicts.Themainreasonforthisisthatpeoplefromdifferentbackgroundsmay not understand each other well. But closer examination would reveal that multi-cultura societiessuchasAustraliaandCanadahaveverylowcrimerates,asimmigrantsarecarefull selectedbygovernments.Itismanifestthatmulti-culturalsocietiesactuallyhavelesstoworr aboutinthisrespect. Having considered all the arguments above, I would conclude that multi-cultura societiesenjoymorebenefitsoverall.
success.Othersubjects,suchasmusicandsports,arenotimportant.Towhatextentdoyo agreeordisagree? Currently,thereisadebateaboutwhether schoolsshouldonlyoffersubjectsthatca helpstudents’futurecareersuccess(i.e.,subjectssuchassportsandmusicareirrelevant).A farasIamconcerned,Ibelievesubjectssuchasmusicandsportsareequallyimportant. Compellingargumentscanbemadethatthoseseeminglyunimportantsubjectssucha art, music and sports are actually just as important as core subjects like English and maths The first point with respect to this is that art, music and sports make a student a well roundedperson.Thereisnodenyingthatayoungpersonwhoisartisticandathleticismore likely to be physically and mentally healthy. Furthermore, subjects like art, music and sport helpstudentstoidentifytheirinterestsandhobbiesearlyinlife. True, ifayoungpersonisabl toknowwhattheyarereallypassionateabout,theycancontinuedoingwhattheyenjoyinthe adult life. More importantly, sports, art and music help students strike a balance in the learningatschool.Clearly,ifstudentsonlystudyEnglishandmathsatschool,theirlifewillb veryboring. It may be tempting to argue that students should focus on what makes them more successful in the future. The fundamental reason for this is that the mainstream society defines “success” in a narrow-minded way. By that I mean most people believe that makin more money is the only definition of success and they think learning English and maths help them make more money. But further analysis would make it clear that being happy i probablywaymoreimportantthanhavingmorewealthinthelongterm. On the basis of the above discussion, I believethat subjects such as music, art and sportsshouldbetaughtineveryschool,apartfromsubjectslikeEnglishandmaths.
positiveoranegativedevelopment? People are having a hard time reaching consensus on whether using the Internet to socialise is a positive or a negative trend amongst young people. To my mind, socialisin onlineisanegativedevelopment. There is no doubt that social networking websites have caused more problems tha merits.Foronething,cyb...
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