Title | Wrtiting Analytically - Chapter 4 Notes |
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Chapter 4 outline for Writing Analytically....
Writing Analytically: Chapter 4- Reasoning from Evidence to Claims 1. Linking Evidence and Claims a. Self-evident - no explanation because the truth can be seen easily b. Make the connection between claims and evidence obvious because not everyone sees it the same
c. Cannot put evidence next to claim and expect reader to make connections 2. The Functions of Evidence a. Evidence shows corroboration - proving/testing validity of a claim b. Prove - (1) evidence is strong enough to say something is true or believable; (2) testing for truth and believability i. Using only the first definition could result in ignoring other evidence ii. Second definition allows you to include and consider other perspectives c. Unsubstantiated claims - “Because I say so” i. Claims that do not have supportive evidence ii. Happens when 1. author focuses on conclusions and not the details that led them to that conclusion 2. Author uses excess detail for a general claim iii. Circular Argument - rephrasing your claim and using it as evidence 1. Infers that you expect readers to take your word for it 2. Shuts down your thinking process and blocks out readers iv. Claims without much evidence tend to be faulty 3. Distinguishing Evidence from Claims a. Look for excessive opinions in your writings by labeling sentences as evidence (e) or claims (c) b. Important to use evidence to test and help refine your claims c. The writer’s opinion is not self-evident truth d. Giving Evidence a Point: Making Details Speak i. Explain how the evidence is relevant to and qualifies your claims ii. Make evidence obvious and do not leave it up to interpretation for the reader iii. Example (pg 94)
4. More than Just “the Facts”: What Counts as Evidence? a. Evidence should not be one-sided or subjective b. “Is the author’s perspective biased? Does this bias undercut the trustworthiness of their information?” c. Methodology - how the data was collected; helps determine relevance 5. The Rules of Argument a. Using words to argue factors in the human experience is not precise like math b. Syllogism i. Major Premise: a general claim believed to be true ii. Minor Premise: a lesser claim also assumed to be true iii. Conclusion: a claim following from the two premises, if the argument is properly structured iv. Example 1. All men are mortal (major premise). 2. Socrates is a man (minor premise). 3. Therefore, Socrates is mortal (conclusion). v. Only as true as the major and minor premises c. Enthymeme - incomplete syllogism because one premise is left unstated i. More common than syllogisms ii. Examples 1. Cats make better pets than dogs because cats are independent a. Unstated Assumption: Independent animals make better pets 2. Charter schools will improve the quality of education because they encourage competition. a. Unstated Assumption: Competition improves the quality of education. d. Toulmin’s Alternative Model of the Syllogism f A rgument ( 1958) i. Uses o ii. He believed that the syllogism did not accurately represent the way people think iii. Toulmin’s Syllogism 1. Data: evidence supporting claim, response to “what do you have to go on?” 2. Warrant: general reason connecting the data and claim, response to “how did you get there?” 3. Claim: a conclusion from data
4. Example (pg 99) 5. Backing - extra supporting information 6. Think of it as: Aristotelian syllogism promises to never mistake the forest for the trees and Toulmin’s syllogism never lets us forget the forest is in fact made up of trees iv. Rogerian Argument and Practical Reasoning 1. Booth and rogers believed argument was not to battle in order to beat an opponent but instead to find common ground 2. Understand and represent the views of the “opponent” 6. Deduction and Induction: Two ways of Linking Evidence and Claims a. Induction: reasoning from particulars to the general i. Credible if a writer can demonstrate that the theory is based on a decent sample of many instances b. Deduction: reasoning from the general to the particular i. Uses evidence to draw out implications ii. Inferring the consequences c. Refer to Fig 4.3 on pg 102 for diagrams d. Scientific Method uses induction to come to conclusions but uses deductive tests according to a pattern i. Deductive premise is only as good as the inductive reasoning proposed in the first place 7. “1 on 10” a. Term for deduction
b. Look at multiple examples to see if there is an applicable claim c. When a scientist looks at a certain phenom and compares it to a theory they are using deductive reasoning
d. Organizing papers using “1 on 10” nd F ocus o rThe M ethod ( Ch1)) i. Start with claim (use N otice a ii. As you look at evidence that reassures your claim iii. Formulate reasons to show that the evidence supports the claim iv. Workout how separate data connects v. Revise and strengthen the implications of your claim (the 1) on the bases of the examples (the 10) e. Potential Problems with “1 on 10” i. Superficial thinking- forget to pay careful attention to detail ii. Mistaken assumptions about the evidence 8. Doing “10 on 1”: Saying More About Less a. Inductive ways to start a piece of writing b. The 1 now stands for the single strong example c. The 10 stands for the various observations you are able to make d. Draw out as much meaning as possible from your absolute best example e. Organizing papers using “10 on 1” nd F ocus o rThe M ethod ( Ch1) to find revealing pattern i. Use Notice a or tendency in your evidence ii. Select a representative example iii. Do 10 on 1 to produce an in-depth analysis of your example iv. Test your results in similar cases f. Potential Problems with “10 on 1” i. Ot demonstrating the representativeness of your example ii. Example must be a part of a bunch of similar evidence, not one particular instance iii. Unwarranted Inductive Leap - generalizing from too little and unrepresentative evidence g. Example (pg 107) ...