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MARCH 2021 – AUGUST 2021ELC 121 - INTEGRATED LANGUAGE SKILLS: ILISTEN – INTERACT – REFLECT – ACTION (LIRA) TEST: 2 (10%)TITLE OF THE STORY: THE KING OF THE BIRDSNAME: YASMIN BINTI SASTERODATE: 7 JUNE 2021GROUP: 8 NAME OFLECTURER: NUR FADZILAH MUHAMAD ZAMANIQuestion: If you were the author of this st...

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MARCH 2021 – AUGUST 2021 ELC 121 - INTEGRATED LANGUAGE SKILLS: I LISTEN – INTERACT – REFLECT – ACTION (LIRA) TEST: 2 (10%) TITLE OF THE STORY: THE KING OF THE BIRDS NAME: YASMIN BINTI SASTERO

DATE: 7 JUNE 2021

GROUP: 8

NAME OF LECTURER: NUR FADZILAH MUHAMAD ZAMANI

Question: If you were the author of this story, and could change something in it, what would you change and why? Explain in relation to the story. Your answers should be in about 150-200 words ONLY.

If I were the author of this story, and could change something in it, I would change the part where the uncle, Nahl Bo caught the poor boy by the collar and threw him out, hurting him and making him cry bitterly. For me, this is too much because the nephew is still a kid and he did not deserve such a harsh treats. I think the rejection from his uncle which he did not want to loan some rice is hard enough to make him sad. Secondly, I would change the last part where Nahl received the charity whenever he asked from his good hearted brother, Hyung and lived in a cottage on Hyung’s estate right after he lost everything. I would ended up my story with let Nahl survive alone without his brother assistance because he did not deserve even a bit of his brother’s kindness. I will make sure Nahl learn his lesson hardly and after a period of time, then Hyung will lend him a shelter and all those charity. Hence, I strongly believe if Hyung always give a chance and help his brother without teach him a lesson, his brother would never learn because he knows that Hyung will always be there for him. That is why I think at the end of this story we must teach him some good lesson for the sake of his changes to be a better person. ( 238 words)

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