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“You” Critique

What I need to Improve It was my first speech in my college life. I was so afraid of standing in front of people, but I have to overcome the fear that I have. I tried to remember three important steps for “You” speech: prepare, rehearsal, conversational. I prepared outline of “You” speech ahead of time and rehearsed over 100 times with the timer set 2:30mins and I thought I was ready, so I volunteered for the first presentation. However, when I stood in front of the class, my heart rate was increasing rapidly, and I couldn’t breathe. After reviewing my speech, I found many mistakes that I need to improve. First, I need to improve my body movement. I used my hands expressively, but my body was same spot until the end of speech. The second mistake was using objects well. I reviewed my speech with tutor, and she said that “You should not show your object to people for a long time, because it may disturb people from focusing on you.” These two mistakes that I need to improve for the next speech.

What I did Well I reviewed my speech with tutor. Even though it was my first time speech, she gave me compliments. There are three things that I did well in this speech. First thing was volume. I spoke with loud voice so that people can hear clearly. Secondly, I practiced immediate response. During the speech, I forgot what I was talking about, and I frustrated. However, I just got back on track immediately by using my mental notes and watching professor’s hand signal. Lastly, eye contact with audiences. I tried eye contact with everyone because audiences like eye contact from the speaker when I am talking....