Bad Hair Day Mane Manager PDF

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Taylor Woolstenhulme Mrs. Green COMM 1101, Per. 1 2 December 2014 Preparation Outline: Persuasive Exercise Topic: Bad Hair Day Purpose: To Cure People’s Bad Hair Day Specific Purpose: To Persuade People that The Mane Manager is the Best Way to Cure Bad Hair Days. Central Idea/Thesis: Bad hair days used to be a unmanageable and unpredictable problem for almost everyone. Now because of the Mane Manager that problem can be easily and quickly fixed. Introduction Attention Step I. Attention Getter (Capture): Hair can turn your whole day around. If you are having a good hair day then you feel happy, energized and sexy. But if you are having a bad hair day then it can make you feel sad, tired and no so attractive. II. Credibility Statement: I have had hair most of my life and have gone through many bad hair days myself, I also have two beautician sisters that have helped me feel confident about advising all of you about how to deal with bad hair days. III. Topic justification (Central Idea/Thesis):Bad hair days used to be a unmanageable and unpredictable problem for almost everyone. Now because of the Mane Manager that problem can be easily and quickly fixed. IV. Preview: I will talk about 1. The Problem: The Curse of Bad Hair 2. The Solution: The Mane Manager 3. Visualization: My Friend Ashley Will Demonstrate.

Transition: There are so many problems that contribute to the likelihood of having a bad hair day. Body Problem/Need Step

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Statement of the problem/Development of the need: frizzies, fine hair, dry hair, or just haven't had a chance to wash your hair can when your crowning glory is misbehavin' it can ruin even the best of times. Extent and Seriousness of the problem: It can ruin your whole day because it can get in your face, people will look at you weird, your boyfriend or girlfriend will wonder if you are worth it? Audience Involvement: On average each person in our class has about 3 bad hair days a week! That is the amount of days that each of us could be having a better day with The Mane Manager Why would want this? Why cant I just wear a hat or put my hair in a ponytail? Because it wrong and it is only hiding the problem! Don’t you want your boyfriend or girlfriend to be able to brush their fingers through you hair without wanting to barf? I thought so.

Transition: So now I will explain how the mane manager works!

Solution/Satisfaction Step I. Evaluation of proposed alternative solution: Through all of my days trying to find a solution to my bad hair I have never found something that works as good a The Mane Manager. II. Statement of solution: This machine can make your hair shiner, thicker, and can get rid of your nasty grease. III. Explanation of solution: How this works is you put in what problems you have then you stick your head inside the hole. When you put your head in this machine it fixes whatever problems you entered. The mane manager uses a combination of water, hot air, oils, mechanical brushing to fix you nasty hair. IV. Illustration/Demonstration of the effectiveness of the solution: Transition: Ashley will come and help me show you how to fix even the worst of hair days. Visualization Step I. Negative Visualization: Ashley comes in with wig on. I ask her how she feels: sad ugly. II. We put in what hair problems she has. She puts her head in the mane manager . all it takes is a little scrubbing and your bad hair day is GONE! III. Positive Visualization: she get a great head of hair with just 30 seconds. She feels happy and sexy.

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When you have dry hair you have a bad hair day When you have a bad hair day you feel sad Having dry hair makes you sad. Ashley is sad because of her bad hair day Because of the bad hair day she uses the Mane Manager When you are sad you should use the Mane Manager Works Cited "Healthy Beauty." Web M.D.  Ed. Collete Bouchez. N.p., n.d. Web. 10 Dec. 2014. ....