5-3 submissive assignment PDF

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This is the 5-3 Revisions and reflections assignment that i just got the grade back as an A....

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1 Mikel Tilton Professor Barnes Eng-122 September 27, 2021

5-3 Submissive assignment part one Feedback and Revision reflection

In the past, when I did revisions, I didn't know that there was such thing as small scale and large scale revisions. I re-wrote it until it sounded good; I guess I did mainly significant scale revisions. I will try a little of both large and small scale revisions because I read it last night and thought about the feedback and mostly minor scale revisions but some large ones. The feedback from my professor helped me realize that my writing will be read by other people one day, so I need to state stuff in my paper more clearly. My essay is good, but it needs some revisions to make it great. I will address some questions that need to go into my paper and revise it like I was writing it for more people to read it and get the same reaction that I did when I read the article. My intended audience is people just starting college and figuring out how to balance college, work, and fun. Some characteristics are: they are curious about how to balance college life with their own. They might be kind of apprehensive about college life and think that it is all either partying or studying. They are probably all just out of high school, so this is their first time on their own, so they want to make the most of this experience. The potential challenges that I might face are; I am a college freshman myself, so they might ask who am I to try to give them advice, they might not take the writing seriously, they might not understand the help from life experience that I am providing. I could ask the questions off of my feedback, and I can make a paragraph towards the end of my paper to reflect on my experience life to illustrate to them that I know what I am trying to convey through my writing....