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Professor Ogata Communication Studies 11

Critique Persuasive Speech For my persuasive speech I will be talking about yoga being better for your health and stress. In the video I looked for what I did wrong and right. First, in the first video I made I tried to have a little smile or have my face have expressions when my voice goes high. It didn’t work it look like I am trying too hard to have my face have expression. Second, my eye contact is not so great because in my speech I have lots of quote and I don’t want to mess up on it, so I keep looking down at my paper. Third, I noticed I didn’t use any umm and like in my last video critique. I just paused when I am about, I say it. Four, in this video I made sure to have my phone far away so I can work on being loud. The great things I noticed was I am not going back and forth when I am talking. I am standing straight and confident. When I am talking, I don’t have that voice crack whenever I talk too much. I pause and take a breath and move along. This speech is going to be the hardest for me because of it being only two topics I am going to cover and saying every word correctly in the long quotes I have in my speech. I am so not prepared for this speech because in the video you can see I am talking slowly because I don’t know what word comes next and loud. For my topic I feel like I could have provided more information besides quote like my personal experience with yoga....